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June 10, 2011

Batwa or Joota

by afatqiamat

.bachpan meen aik shararat jo hum mohalay waloon say mill ker aksr kertey they …us ka taluq batway say thaa…

Professor sahib key ghar ki seerhiyoon per beyth ker aik batway ko dhagay say bandh ker sarak par pheynk deytey they….

… Nayab Cinema say aksr loog show khatam hooney key baad , sarak crass ker key , Govt College wali gali say guzartey they…… kafi rush hoota thaa…

aysay meen agr kissi ko wooh batwaa nazr ayee , to lazmn …….wooh usko uthanay key liyee jhuktaa thaa……… Batwaa……..or us meen mumkina tour per moujood paisaoon key bari kashish hooti hey…

uskay baad uskay sath joo hoota thaa…woh aik alg dastaan heyn. …….kiyon keh jaisay hi wooh batway ki taraf hath barhataa……. Seerhi per beythaa huwa larka , jis key hath meen us say bandhaa dhagoo hoota thaa,…….us ko kheych leytaa……..or batwaa……….ur ker uskay hathoon meen anay say pehlay hi ur jaata , ya agr hath meen aata bhi to chalang laga ker nikal jaata….
us kay baad , us shaks keee shakl or harkateen deykhey wali hooti theen……kai to is mafroor batway key peechay bhagney lagtey they ….kai us per chalang lagatey they…….kai thitak ker ruk jaatay or phir ahista ahistaa ghat laganey key liyee doubara us ki taraf barhtey …..magr , kahani phir dohrai jaati , yaani ….hath aya huwaa batwa , hathon key tooton ki tarah phir nikal jaata….

us waqt agr kissi larkey hi hansi nakl jatee, tub mamlaa uski samjh meen aatta, or woh ya to ghussa hoota , ya khajal hoo ker sharminda sharminda saa khisiyani hansi hansta huwaa agay berh jaata..

…… aik dafa aik sahib , Govt School ki deewar key sath , ….. rafa-e-hajat meen masroof they……. Moti ney batwa unkay paas ki pheynk diyaa……. ub deewar key sath beythay huway jub unki nazar ……mumkina mal per pari , or wooh bhi itnaa qareeb …….to ……… sath hi hath barhayaa …….magr batwa phudak ker agay berh geyaa…..unhoon ney wahan say hi batway per dive lagaee .. ..ub halat yeh keh pant neechay ……….pairoon meen phansi huwi…. nangay mungay ….. zameen per girry huway….or batwaa……..unsay chand inch hi agay paraa huwaa unka munh chirhaa rahaa.. or wooh pat pat ankheen phar ker usko deykh rehey keh yeh agay kaisay bhaga….

phir jab larkoon kay Qahqahay ki awaz sunayee dee….to uthey or aysaa bhagay …..keh apni jootiyaan bhi wahan hi chor gayee…………or kafi deyr agay ja ker , unko pant ooper karnay ka khiyaal ayaa….

……….. humeen yaqeen yeh , yeh waqiyaa sari zindagi unheen …..peryshan kartaa rehey gaa.

..isee tarha aik dafa aik sahib ko , hasb-e-mamool khali deewar deykh ker apni nishani wahan choorney ka khiyal ayaa…….. mousoof Cycle per they , maghrib ka time thaa… cycle say utreey , usko tala lagayaa , Izhar band khoola , or aik khali jagha deykh ker ……apni nishani laganay lagay…..

…..phir unheen bhi qareeb hi batwa para nazr ayaa , …abhi wooh us per ghour ker hi rahay they , keh batwaa khud ba khud uchlaa or thoori door jaa ker giraa….

…wooh bhi uchal pareey…..chookney , or batway ko doubara ghour say deykhaa…. batway ney phir aik phudkee lagayee….. ub phir choonkey , or batway ki taraf barhey…… to batway ney unko deykh ker …….aik dam bugat dour lagaa dee…..hawa meen uchaltaa huwaa…….sarak paar janey laga…

unhoon ney jo you baway ko khud ba khudd…hawa meen urtey deykhaa……to Bhoot bhoot bhooot kertey aysaa bhagay ….. keh ghayeeb hi hoo gayee…..

Larkoon ko bhi sharart sooojee………Cycle key paas gayee……..to deykhaa cycle to ko tala laga huwaa hey ……..beher haal , ghumaa ker cycle kaa rukh tabdeel ker diyaa…or waha hi khree rehney dee…

aik adh ghantey baad wooh sahib …….do our admiyoon key sath ayee… or apni Cycle ley gayee ……….humeen yaqeen hey wooh cycle ka rukh tabdeel hooney per bhii hairan rehey hoongay…

June 2, 2011

Qissa Nahanay ka

by afatqiamat

karachi meen swiming pools ki kami hey , pehlay to our bhi ziada thee , ley dey ker aik Kashmir complex meen thaa, per wahan janay ki na hum meen himmat thee na aukat .

chunachey Gulshan-e-iqbal meen aik dhoonda thaa , per wahan bhi rush hooney laga thaa, phir aik water-pump per kissi ney batayaa , magar wahan to legta hey , bhayenseen nahati theen , itna ganda hoota thaa, so source lerayee, to pata chala keh yar-e-man Samson Shahbaz zariya bun sakta hey , kiyoon keh Hasan square key peechay aik church hey, or wahan aik swiming pool bhi hey, khair samson bhi razi hoo geyaa ,
wahah gayee to pata chala keh jissy wooh swiming pool kehtey heen , wooh to aik Pani ka tank hey, jiss mee kheytoon kay liyee pani jama kiyaa jaata hey.

khair humeen kiyaa, aik to muft ka thaa, phir sara ka sara apna, koi our aa ker tang naheen kerta thaa ,kiyoon keh church ka thaa , baray mazay kiyee wahan, pani meen hath peyr marna bhi wahan hi seekha, kitnee tayraqi ayee, naheen jantay , kiyoon keh wooh bohot choota thaa, per phir bhi do teen chaker to uskay laga hi leytay they aik sans meen.

kafi dost jama hootey they wahan , poora group thaa , ghalibn 8-9 larkoon kaa ,

aik duffa jub usmeen dubkiyaan khaa rehey they , to kissi key nahaney ki chadi uttar gayee or pani kay opper aa gayee, Saud kay hath lagi , to us nay poocha kah kiss ki hey, sub shararti they, so jis ki utree they , wooh bhi khamosh raha, janta thaa keh bata diyaa to khair naheen .
khair Shakil ney wooh chadi utha ker Tank say Bahir aik darkht per phyenk dee, keh jis ki hey, ub qudrati libas meen ja ker khud hi uthayee gaa.

wooh mousuf bhi kissi ko batayee baghair nahatay rehey, khair sham huwi to sub Tank say bahir ayee….

sirf Qamar naheen ayee , Qamar hum sub meen sub say dubla patla thaa, ghalibn uskay apnay paas nahaney ki chadi naheen thee, so wooh apnay aba ki pehen ayee hoo gaa, or kiyoon key wooh bari thee, lehaza ghoota leganay kay waqt utar gayee hoo gee.
ub uskay liyee to masla per geyaa, bahir keysay nikley , sub loog thoori dour jaa ker theher gayee , or wooh baychara wahan hi Tank ki dewar say chipkaa , sub ki minat samajat kernay lagaa , per uski madad kernay ko koi bhi teyar naheen thaa..

humeen hamdardi soojhee, so hum ney wahay kheytoon meen lagay huway Kailay kay darkht say do pattay touray or aa ker usko diyaa, keh loo in kaylay kay pattoon say sattar poshi karoo , or jaa ker darkht per tangi chadi uttar loo or pehen loo ..
majbouran Qamar , Dhai Pasli ka tarzan ban ker , kayley kay patoon meen lipat ker niklaa , magar us say pehley keh wooh chadi tak pohunchtaa , Nasir joo sub say lamba thaa ,uchak ker chadi uttar lee,

Ub Nasir agay agay, or Qamar , kaiylay kay patoon kei libas meen uskay peechey peechay ,
un dinoon Hassan square kay peechay ka illaqa taqreeban sunsan hi huwa kerta thaa, khair , flatoon key peechey say bhagtey bhagtey wooh doonon taqreeban Bus stop tek a gayee .

us per sary doostoon ney Nasir say kaha keh bus ub bohot hoo gayee , kafi sata liyee hey, lehaza uski chadi wapus ker dee jayee, or Nasir nay bhi abadi qareeb anay per , khud hi wapus ker dee , humaray group ki aik khasiyat thee keh apus meen mazak kertey they , per kissi kay samnay koi aisaa mazak naheen kertey they keh jis say sharmindagi hoo.

khair Qamar ney aik kooney meen ja ker chadi pehni , per uskay jism per aik chadi hi thee , uski pant or qameez ho Saud utha layaa thaa, kehnay laga wapus ker doo , sardi leg rahey hey , .
ub to aik or shughal haath lag geyaa, sub ney apnay apnay towliyaa us ko lipta diyaee , per pant kameez naheen dee , ub uski ajeeb halat thee, jism per 7-8 towliyaa liptey huway , or aik chadi pehnay huway ….
bari minat samajat ki , per Suad ney uskay kapray apnay theyley meen dal diyee ,magar usko diyaa naheen.
khair un dinoon Hassan square per bhi itna rush naheen hoota thaa, or maghrib ka aas pass to waqoneen bhi khali mil jayaa kertee theen.

Qamar U5 say apnay ghar jayaa kerta thaa, U5 uskay ghar kay bilkul samnay say guzartee thee , so wooh usko apni zati gari kehtaa thaa, U5 kay conductor or driver bhi ghalibn uskoo nam or shakal say pehchantey they.

aik U5 ayee to Shakil usko ley ker U5 kay driver kay pass geyaa, kehnay laga, yeh bachaa isee tarhaa khairiyat say ghar pohunchna chahiyee, phir us ko Saud ka theyla dey ker boula , yeh thaylaa usko ghar jaa ker hi deyna hey, us say pehlay naheen .

Driver bhi koi zinda dil thaa, baray serious andaz meen boulaa janab fikr hi na kareen , aap ki amanat poori khairyat say poohnchay gee , or saman bhi usko tab hi miley gaa.

so beychara Qamar , aik drama bun ker U5 meen beyth geyaa , Nasir bhi uskay ghar kay pass hi rehtaa thaa, wooh bhi sath hi beyth geyaa….
or youn Qamar mian goyaa ” loot kay budhooo ghar ko ayee ”

bad meen Nasir ney bataya, keh U5 walay ney bilkul waisa hi kiyaa jaisay keh usko batayaa gayaa thaa, yani Qamar ko bilkul uskay ghar key darwazay per uttara , is tarha keh Qamar Sahib aik chadi , or 6-7 towliyon meen liptay huway they, or ghar pohunch ker kaproon ka lifafa us ko diyaa geyaa, bulkey U5 kay driver khud utter ker uskoo sath ley ker , uskay ghar geyaa, or ghanti baja ker usko uskay bhai key hawalay kiyaa yeh kerh ker, keh yeh mousuf Gum hoo gayee they , so driver unko Pehchan ker apnay sath wapus layee hey.

or uskay bhai nay yaqeeni key halat meen kafi deyr bahir hi kharaa U5 ko jaata deykhtaa rehaa.

NOTE ; Is  Qissay meen hum ney  khuch namak mirch bhi lagayaa hey , or  naam bhi tabdeel kiyee heyn……..  Qamar wooh naheen , jis key sath yeh qissa peysh ayee …..or dosray kirdaroon ka bhi namm  idher udher kiyaa hey .

haan  tasaweer  asli heyn..

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